Spiral by Fred Kimmel

Broadjam Artist: Fred KimmelSong: SpiralReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: Killer intro, excellent theme…I like the idea of the spiral going round and round. Effective word picture (though sad) in the back seat verse. Screaming guitars fit …

Fred Kimmel

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Spiral

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Killer intro, excellent theme…I like the idea of the spiral going round and round. Effective word picture (though sad) in the back seat verse. Screaming guitars fit song well. Lead riffs great. Catchy hook. Great job. Danceable.

Constructive Comments: Verse 2 was the most descriptive. Try to make all your verses as succinct. I’m not a rock fan but you did a good job on this one.