
Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: We’re Not Even Friends
Reviewer: Katilyn
Positive Comments: Got a cool retro vibe to the instrumentation, and the singer has a good voice.
Constructive Comments: I can’t tell what the hook is…there’s not a lyric that repeats in a consistent part of the song to tie the whole thing together (e.g. at the end of each verse and the end of the chorus, or at the end of each pre-chorus). The lyrics are also so vague that I can’t connect to the song, emotionally. What, specifically, happened that made you not even friends? If you get more specific, then the people who have been in that same type of situation will really connect and not want to stop listening to your song!