Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: That Chair By The Window
Reviewer: Katilyn
Positive Comments: You have a beautiful voice, and the instrumentation is gorgeous.
Constructive Comments: The intro is very long and makes it seem like this song might just be instrumental, and you don’t get to your hook until about 2:30, at which point you would have already lost the listener’s attention because they’re wondering what this song is even about. And the breaks in the lyrics are a bit awkward… for instance, “I stopped leaving” sounded like a complete sentence, the way you sang it… and I thought, “what the heck does that mean? Stopped leaving who/what?” You’ve got the talent, instrumentally and vocally, to be successful…I just think I’d restructure the song