Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Ghost Whispers Over Ellis Island (Folk Rock)
Reviewer: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Positive Comments: This is a good subject to write about……..
Constructive Comments: nothing really to add except the lyrics don’t match the music…..This girl has a really good voice….But the phrasing and lyrics needs a lot of work…as a producer, I would not have let that one out Sorry for the bluntness. But my job as a producer is to get the most of a song as possible..And the big problem is there are far too many good vocalist. that are uncoachable. those good vocalist could be better than good…if they were coachable…..Case in point..Celine Deon for example grew to who she is today because she was coached by David Foster as he coached many top artist today…. In a documentary on him I watched awhile back he said He would only work with artists that are coachable…I am no David Foster but I have very high standards also .I have helped a lot of vocalist along on their journey with better skills which lets them write better and more interesting lyrics… sorry for going on… but it’s what I do….