Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: The Long Train Ride Home
Reviewer: VOYA
Positive Comments: Lovely piece of music. Absolutely love the melody and the style of your piece. The melody is wonderful and the registers where the instruments are playing are very well chosen. Beautiful sound.
Constructive Comments: These are just some ideas I had while listening to your tune…I could very well imagine the piece staring even more delicate, for instance by playing pizz in the accompaniment instead of staccato notes. And then introduce the staccatos @ about 00:50.The accompaniment also could use some “movement”, they tend to get a little static. Maybe introduce a pause in the accompaniment here and there, and let the violin play the melody on it’s own would break it up a little bit. And there0s a pretty long pause before your piece starts (about 8 secs), maybe this could be shorter. But these are just ideas…I absolutely love the piece.