
Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Instead
Reviewer: Lawrence K. Bodien
Positive Comments: Nice, original instrumentation. Vocal pitch on, probably not the easiest line to sing. With that boring line, I really don’t know how to put this, but in a film, its when the actor turns to the audience and talks directly to them. Now the song has taken on another character, something few songs have.
Constructive Comments: This is the way I see it. A cat, a somewhat messed up room, an obviously very tired woman stumbles to the door, opens to Mr. distraught pours forth his story, either a woman listening, or a cartoon of such, repeating and repeating. A picture of a another woman flirting with him then walking off with someone else waving at him. In other words a very, very marketable video. You are not an if. You are a when, and it will be very soon. Think about what you want. Mr. Jonney Cash ” I Hear that train a comin etc. “