Help me feel safe by Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029Song: Help me feel safeReviewer: Derrick ProcellPositive Comments: I really like the vocalist here. Plaintive and sincere delivery. Good sense of pitch and timing.The song is a fine song for the genre…not necessarily the b…

Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Help me feel safe

Reviewer: Derrick Procell

Positive Comments: I really like the vocalist here. Plaintive and sincere delivery. Good sense of pitch and timing.The song is a fine song for the genre…not necessarily the blues, which is the genre that I thought I was listening to…simple guitar/vocal works well here.

Constructive Comments: Not very original melodically or lyrically…could use some more work. The recording is a fine demo quality. Adding some more instrumentation might help…maybe some vocal harmony?Solid overall. Keep at it!