Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: Help me feel safe
Reviewer: Paul Pierce Project
Positive Comments: Guitar sounds good at the head. When the vocal hits I think of Alanis Morissette, especially the dry vocal, way up front. The lyrics are interesting. This is a pretty story-teller singer/songwriter piece of music. I’m giving credit to the singer for decent pitch and nice control, even in her upper register. Interesting way the song finishes a hook and goes to that unexpected chord change, most notably at the end of the song. Nice!
Constructive Comments: Vocal is too far out in front of the mix for my taste. So even though she is a very good singer, a mix that is this vocal-dominant leaves her too exposed, too naked. By 1:40 when that verse lands, there should be some build in the song or the mix. If it will always just be a guitar and vocal performance, then the guitar needs to play something that adds to the intensity moving forward. Like a slight rhythm change? Just my two cents. When I say this song has no market potential what I mean is THIS MIX OF THIS SONG needs work to be commercial.