Broadjam Artist: Lawrence K. Bodien
Song: clam
Reviewer: Paul Pierce Project
Positive Comments: I like the mellow feel of a string/synth pad under the piano line. Also really like how it starts with the pad and repeating notes at the head. It grabbed me right away.Then just when I thought the song was going to cruise around and around in a circle endlessly, it went to a new, minor change which was unexpected and a nice diversion!
Constructive Comments: I would like to hear a more distinct melody. Especially to the point of creating an instrumental hook for the song to leave and then come back to. Also I noticed a couple of spots in the recording that were not clean – as in a possible glitch in the recording? My third point would be that it occasionally sounds a bit “sequenced,” especially when playing the 16th note fill/run which sounded just a bit stiff. However, if that run was played naturally, my hat’s off to you for the perfection of it! This is a nice tune and easy to listen to. Great job!