Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art CoreySong: Celebration Of Life CoreysReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts-This sounded like a lion king song. Your lyric were general and I would have appreciated more specifics…

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Celebration Of Life Coreys
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts-This sounded like a lion king song. Your lyric were general and I would have appreciated more specifics with a story of why she is so beautiful. I love the music and instruments mix. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Some what 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? somewhat 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? no5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? Somewhat
Constructive Comments: any suggestions for the arrangement, mix or lyrics? I would rewrite the lyric and tell a picture story that draw your listener to the hook. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? Some what7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? happy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Some what 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes with different lyrics.