Month: January 2021

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: LIGHT A CANDLE (MIX 2)

Reviewer: Donovan Lukas

Positive Comments: Really like this song. Admittedly I’m a bit of a sucker for this style, but regardless, it moved me. Big Rob Thomas vibes, but its not distractingly similar. Vocals are rich and the arrangement blends wonderfully. Harmonies are a nice touch.

Constructive Comments: Not the biggest fan of the piano right at the very end I found it jarring. I was hoping that the song might have built up towards the end as the vocals are so powerful and rich. But this is me just being picky because it is quite a lovely track.

Broadjam Artist: John Walradt
Song: The Most of Nothing

Reviewer: Donovan Lukas

Positive Comments: Decent arrangement, vocals are clear and the rhythm guitar is tight. Enjoyable and sweet.

Constructive Comments: The end cuts off a bit abruptly. Might be worth incorporating some vocal harmonies for a richer sound.

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Just Another Day

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Very cool and unusual country song. Cool use of a few jazz chords reminiscent og John Mayer or Andy Summers. I reaaly liked this piece.

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: BETHLEHEM PA

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Cool country song about being on the road with a wife with a bun in the oven.

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Broadjam Artist: Thierry Coupey
Song: Tribal Memories (the Grounded Spirits)

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Very cool atmospheric world track

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Broadjam Artist: Tranz
Song: Stepucije

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Very cool atmospheric dance track. Nice use of sounds. Very cool mix! Very cool break at 1:08 I like this piece.

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Broadjam Artist: Dallas Marshall
Song: Techno Jazz

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Song’s got the funk. Cool stuff. Wa-oo

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Broadjam Artist: Chris Landi
Song: Syn De Romance Piano

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Absolutely beautiful piano composition. Quite mellow.

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: No More Worries ’bout Me (rustic vocal)

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Nice piano and vocal recording. Good work.

Constructive Comments: I have no idea how this is a soundtrack piece. It sounds to me like a singer/songwriter demo than anything else or a unique pop song similar to John Legend.

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: A Bayou Kind of Night

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and Drums.Your lyrics tell a great story.Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and Synth 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.