Month: January 2021

Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Wonder Boy (KaytLynn, percussion)

Reviewer: Duttz

Positive Comments: A pretty song well recorded I could hear this on radio

Constructive Comments: A nice happy song

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: On An Ordinary Tuesday 9/11 COREYS NEW SAX/PIANO/BASS

Reviewer: Duttz

Positive Comments: It was recorded very well very laid back in style you could hear kenny rogers singing a tune like this

Constructive Comments: I could not see any way i could improve this song

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Pretty Words and I Love You’s (Piano/vocal)

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and music. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts?–vocals and piano 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. consider pitching it Carrie Underwood or Little Big Town–they take outside song pitches. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing.6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Broadjam Artist: Shadow Creek
Song: Shame

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and music. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts?–vocals and piano 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Please get a professional demo this and pitch it Darius Rucker or Billy Currington–they take outside song pitches.Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: Maybe

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar. Your lyrics tell a great story. Did you like specific instrumental parts–vocals and guitar. Sounds like a Carrie Underwood song you can pitch to her.1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had after the chorus–just lovely. The lyrics were great with specific details. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: blues for the daily use

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: You had me from the first note. I loved the music and guitar. Did you like specific instrumental parts–Guitar 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.

Constructive Comments: I loved that musical break you had–just lovely. Wishing you that best with this song. Happy writing. 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Dance 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? fun and catchy 9) Is my idea/music strong enough to carry an entire song? yes 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes.

Broadjam Artist: John Walradt
Song: Stay Here Now featuring Clay Collins

Reviewer: Eddie Small

Positive Comments: I like the song – but it tried to hard – make it simpler

Constructive Comments: I have listened to 8 songs and everyone is over complicated like a 2 1/2 hour movie could be 2 hours to many story lines ok

Broadjam Artist: Dooly
Song: SkullTrap

Reviewer: Eddie Small

Positive Comments: I like the song alot Chance The Rapper type stuff

Constructive Comments: I would replace the one Melody Line with Lyrics are you not a singer well have one perform this and make a Lyric hook to go with the Music Hook that is there.

Broadjam Artist: Steven Furr
Song: Keep It Moving

Reviewer: Eddie Small

Positive Comments: I like the song the tempo. Boz Scaggs 70 80 stuff

Constructive Comments: Hmmm something is off with the guitar and the pianoI like the guitar try a diff keyboard sound.

Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Into You

Reviewer: Eddie Small

Positive Comments: I like it a bit much going on to complicated – Rage Machine – Some

Constructive Comments: I do like the guitar and it could come sooner in the song.