Take Me To An Island NEW FLUTE & SAX MIX by Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art CoreySong: Take Me To An Island NEW FLUTE & SAX MIXReviewer: Redlady8029Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts– loved the instruments saxophone was killer.lyrics need some work. Jobs of Each Sectio…

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Take Me To An Island NEW FLUTE & SAX MIX

Reviewer: Redlady8029

Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts– loved the instruments saxophone was killer.lyrics need some work. Jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1–character, context, setting chorus–give the big idea v2–take the big idea further bridge (if necessary) –take the big idea even further.

Constructive Comments: How does the song overall make me feel? the instruments moved me . What “grabs” me or draws me in? The feel of the song Does any part of the song let me down, pull me out of the moment, or distract me? None.Is anything unclear, or does anything sound “funny”? None What’s the hook of the song (instrument, line, clever idea twist, title?) some what Can I remember the title? Is the title expressed clearly in the song? yes Can I hum the melody or sing the chorus after hearing it once?Some what

The Creator by Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)Song: The CreatorReviewer: SRJPositive Comments: This definitely fits within the style of experimental as you have brought in a variety of melodies, instruments and rhythms. I particularly like the Far Eastern…

Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)

Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: The Creator

Reviewer: SRJ

Positive Comments: This definitely fits within the style of experimental as you have brought in a variety of melodies, instruments and rhythms. I particularly like the Far Eastern feel I get when listening to this track.

Constructive Comments: The track doesn’t get in its entirety. Because you are using so many different melodies, instruments and rhythms, I don’t get a sense of structure – i.e. verse/chorus. Additionally, a recognisable hook is missing.

Facebook Addict by Randall Mark

Broadjam Artist: Randall MarkSong: Facebook AddictReviewer: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABSPositive Comments: This is an unconventional subject………but its good……Constructive Comments: the delivery needs help. but it’s a good song

Randall Mark

Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Facebook Addict

Reviewer: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Positive Comments: This is an unconventional subject………but its good……

Constructive Comments: the delivery needs help. but it’s a good song

Niamh by bluecountry1976.com

Broadjam Artist: bluecountry1976.comSong: NiamhReviewer: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABSPositive Comments: This is a beautiful piece…. I love it..Constructive Comments: this is right there….. don’t change a thing…

bluecountry1976.com

Broadjam Artist: bluecountry1976.com
Song: Niamh

Reviewer: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Positive Comments: This is a beautiful piece…. I love it..

Constructive Comments: this is right there….. don’t change a thing…

The Other Side by Groove Fondue

Broadjam Artist: Groove FondueSong: The Other SideReviewer: bluecountry1976.comPositive Comments: Perfect for the genre. I bet this artist is great live also. A decent song also. Excellent. Country fans would explore this artist and go to see them live…

Groove Fondue

Broadjam Artist: Groove Fondue
Song: The Other Side

Reviewer: bluecountry1976.com

Positive Comments: Perfect for the genre. I bet this artist is great live also. A decent song also. Excellent. Country fans would explore this artist and go to see them live, when possible. Great vocal. Fiddles are a great addition.

Constructive Comments: The recording really suits the genre and has a great live feel. The vocal and arrangement really deliver the song. Well played instruments as expected in this genre.

Don’t Like This Girl Paulie by SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABSSong: Don’t Like This Girl PaulieReviewer: bluecountry1976.comPositive Comments: A full on Country, electric band version of a tune. Vocal ideal for the genre. A good song that draws in the listener to want to see th…

SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Don’t Like This Girl Paulie

Reviewer: bluecountry1976.com

Positive Comments: A full on Country, electric band version of a tune. Vocal ideal for the genre. A good song that draws in the listener to want to see the band live or buy a CD etc.

Constructive Comments: Perfect for the genre. No further constructive comments. Probably a great live act and people get into their recordings that way as well as Country Radio.

He tells me Everyday by Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029Song: He tells me EverydayReviewer: bluecountry1976.comPositive Comments: An excellent performance that delivers the tune, the lyrics and meaning of the song. It captures the genre of country (Americana) and is a humble/roug…

Redlady8029

Broadjam Artist: Redlady8029
Song: He tells me Everyday

Reviewer: bluecountry1976.com

Positive Comments: An excellent performance that delivers the tune, the lyrics and meaning of the song. It captures the genre of country (Americana) and is a humble/rough and ready recording at times – that suits the genre. I really like it. There are some great, legendary, vocalists in this style of music and the vocalist here can be proud that they have done the business.

Constructive Comments: I would like to hear more from this artist. I hope they continue with a humble sound rather than change or explore an over produced one. The recording itself could be done ‘better’ but would anything be improved? Good Americana.

The Holyoke Soldiers Home by Edward Small

Broadjam Artist: Edward SmallSong: The Holyoke Soldiers HomeReviewer: bluecountry1976.comPositive Comments: A very interesting artist, that makes you want to listen to more (to find out more about their experimental sound within a folky delivery). Imp…

Edward  Small

Broadjam Artist: Edward Small
Song: The Holyoke Soldiers Home

Reviewer: bluecountry1976.com

Positive Comments: A very interesting artist, that makes you want to listen to more (to find out more about their experimental sound within a folky delivery). Importantly, it is rare to review a song that makes you think and makes you reflect on the issues that the lyrics deliver.A passionate vocal, delivered with meaning…good arrangement.

Constructive Comments: This recording works to deliver the concepts, song and lyrics going on here, an earthy folky feel…the vocal is even a bit ‘world music’…a lot going on…well done. To say it needs a clearer recording may be at odds with what was intended anyway.