
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Take Me To An Island NEW FLUTE & SAX MIX
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts– loved the instruments saxophone was killer.lyrics need some work. Jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1–character, context, setting chorus–give the big idea v2–take the big idea further bridge (if necessary) –take the big idea even further.
Constructive Comments: How does the song overall make me feel? the instruments moved me . What “grabs” me or draws me in? The feel of the song Does any part of the song let me down, pull me out of the moment, or distract me? None.Is anything unclear, or does anything sound “funny”? None What’s the hook of the song (instrument, line, clever idea twist, title?) some what Can I remember the title? Is the title expressed clearly in the song? yes Can I hum the melody or sing the chorus after hearing it once?Some what







