Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: Where the Sunshines Down Below (Live @ Ft. Lauderdale Song info
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts–I love the vocal and the guitar lyrics–I wanted more specifics in the verse and the hook in the chorus. 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? Yes 3) Is my melody interesting? At first yes but need more highs and lows to keep the listener interested4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? somewhat 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? no
Constructive Comments: Have any suggestions for the arrangement- Love the sentiment of the song but with a melody with high and lows this could be a killer song.lyrics–here is the job of each section–Jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1–character, context, setting chorus–give the big idea v2–take the big idea further bridge (if necessary) –take the big idea even further. Keep writing and developing this song it has great potential.6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? somewhat7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? tap my feet8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Sadness9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? yes with a better melody and more specific lyrics. Overall great job