Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: Dyin’ Embers
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: I loved everything about this song. The hook–DYIN’ EMBERStouched me and is fire. The piano music was beautiful. Is this song downloadable I would love to have a copy.1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? Yes 3) Is my melody interesting? Yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? Yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? Yes
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Cry—Just beautiful.8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Love 9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? yes10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Yes over and over. Great job. Wishing you the best with this song.