Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Wrong State Of Mind …..Corey’s
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: The vocal make this song. The music needs contrast between the chorus and verses. It sounds like 70’s classic. The overall feel is sadness.
Constructive Comments: I wanted to hear more of the story and more of the hook in a positive light. I thought the song was called the right state of mind. In V1 set up your characters, setting and context. Use word pictures in the lyrics to bring more emotion.