Broadjam Artist: Ronald Arduini
Song: Sweet Margarite
Reviewer: Steven Furr
Positive Comments: I like the mix of Spanish and English in this piece. I do not speak Spanish, so I didn’t understand the bulk of the lyrics, but I can hear they blend very well with the instrumentation. Also, that is the reason I didn’t suggest a title. I like the strings coming in on the second verse, they add a nice air and openness.
Constructive Comments: The song sounds very good. It’s difficult to critique something with such a pro sound already. If I had to critique, I could only say that maybe the mix could be improved by bringing down the vocal and keys just a bit. Maybe bring the drums up just a bit. Keep in mind this is what I’m hearing on my end. I do not have pro gear so I’m just comparing to what I would normally hear. Otherwise, this song is set to go as is!