Broadjam Artist: Juneboy Music
Song: Love Won’t Pass This Way
Reviewer: Kelly Triplett
Positive Comments: There’s some Luther Vandross in there! The instrumentation was pretty. Very good singer.
Constructive Comments: There were some vocal pitch problems. The singer is very capable if given a chance to open up. I think there are some lyrical challenges that cause the singing to be a bit awkward. Take a look at the lyrics to see if you can say the same thing in a more efficient and different way – it’s a bit too conversational. The instrumentation, which is very nice, clean, and sweeping sounds like it’s all mixed straight down the middle. Maybe pan instruments a little to the left and right to give it a more full sound. There’s potential in this song. It just needs to be allowed to breathe a bit. I hope you accept this review in the spirit it’s offered. Best of luck to you! Cheers!