Broadjam Artist: Jenny McGregor
Song: Butterfly
Reviewer: CW Mullins
Positive Comments: Wow. Can’t wait to find out who this is. Major talent. Strong song, well arranged, great voice. I’ll come up with a couple “nitpicks” for the constructive comments section but really this is maybe the best thing I have heard in my 3 or 4 months on Broadjam. I’ve heard a lot of stuff very professionally recorded, but when it comes down to it, how strong and original is the song? Most aren’t really all that special. This is.
Constructive Comments: OK my nitpicks – the recording is a little “airless.” I don’t know how to put it in technical terms. Maybe a little “in the red” in terms of recording levels? 5 minutes is just a touch long too, better to leave us wanting more. The lyric has a couple moments that are a bit wordy, I’d strip it down to basics just a tad. Nitpicks over! Great track.