Month: September 2020

Broadjam Artist: John Walradt
Song: The Most of Nothing

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: I like the lyrics very positive as is the instrumentation.

Constructive Comments: I would have brought up the instrumentation a bit. Other than that it’s a very pleasant tune.

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: touch down

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Very chill instrumental, has a good positive vibe to it.. guitar fits perfectly into the pocket.

Constructive Comments: A bit repetitive for my taste, but still well done.

Broadjam Artist: Thierry Coupey
Song: Why Do the Skies Cry ?

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Very well Produced. love the pad Throughout. Nice choice of acoustic piano too. You’ve really hit the mark on ambient.

Constructive Comments: None at all.

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Will You Still Love Me? (Folk, Pop-Alternative)

Reviewer: John Walradt

Positive Comments: The true test of songwriting is if the words and music get across with just one voice and one instrument. Does the tune have a memorable hook, do the words say something and match the mood of the melody. You’ve done this on all counts. Terrific inflections in your vocals and your instrumentation is great. I wish I could do as well.

Constructive Comments: No comments needed here. You already know everything you want to do with your songwriting.

Broadjam Artist: Barry Osbourn
Song: Looking Back

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nicely flowing piece with a great meld of instruments. Horns add a very nice flavor to it. This should work very well in a TV show or movie.

Constructive Comments: Cool piece.

Broadjam Artist: Michael Centola (20 Minute Mission)
Song: Not Just Coffee

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really cool and original piece with really good guitar and drum work and a killer riff.

Constructive Comments: Nice work.

Broadjam Artist: CW Mullins
Song: Bunk Beds

Reviewer: John Walradt

Positive Comments: You know what’s refreshing about this? It sounds raw, old-tmey, the not-so-perfect slick production but that was the intention, so it works, and works well! It has the feel of a lazy summer camp. I like the vocals because they’re so bad that they’re good. What else could fit? Hey, Neil Young gets away with it! This song is unique in its campy way and as marketing goes, it’s a good thing.

Constructive Comments: Nothing negative. Sit back and have a beer!

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Storm Of Days (Roots/Contemporary Blues)

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: great man!, everything, you’re damn good at what you do!

Constructive Comments: nothing but, They don’t have a category for this, its really just singer songwriter, not really what I’d call blues rock but I see why you put it there, they don’t have an acoustic category either? lots of things missing here on this site

Broadjam Artist: DeDe WedeKind
Song: Sell Me Out

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: Great singer, pretty good lyrics, lots of energy and emotions, pretty good overall

Constructive Comments: the only thing that bothers me is the recording quality, its actually pretty good, just needs a new mix and some mastering, its a bit Bass heavy , the vocals actually sound right in the EQ but maybe the bass is too loud and the guitars and keys are a bit too quiet.

Broadjam Artist: Sam Cooper
Song: DIRTY WOMEN (featuring Troy Walls–vocals)

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: I Like the song, and the vocals are well done, good lyrics, fun song, and seems like the performances are pretty good But

Constructive Comments: But the recording is kinda odd, its seems like everything is separate not exactly sure what it is but maybe it just needs some compression and mastering, seems kinda thin , not quite sure on this one what it is,