Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Alone On Valentines Day Again (Pop-Adult Contemporary, Folk)
Reviewer: Michael Jones
Positive Comments: I believe the vocals are world class and the singer is a serious vocal talent. Almost a Neil Young tone to the vocals. Very smooth and pitch is dead on.
Constructive Comments: The vocals are outstanding but the lyrics need work in my opinion. They need to stay tight and smooth from start to finish. With this song the first 1:00 lyrics are pretty strung but after that some of the lyrics seem forced and it causes the song to meander and get too loose.I recommend listing closely to the syllables in the lyrics and thing then more smoothly to the sound.