Broadjam Artist: Laurence Watkins
Song: That Girl
Reviewer: paul sandberg
Positive Comments: love the haunting aspects of this – nice instrumental track with cool chord changes with just enough spacey guitar to keep things interesting.Enjoyed the lyrics as well and the ethereal effect of the vocals at the end – liked the answer back greek chorus as well.
Constructive Comments: not centering the lead vocal is a bit disconcerting as that and fighting frequencies tend to bury the vocal track – put the lead vox in the center with a large, dark plate reverb and see if that doesn’t give this all a better feel (you can leave the chorus vox panned – that’s just fine). I would also roll back some eq on the rhythm track around 1.5 mhz to give the vocals more room, and also, watch your pitch – end of the first verse especially.in all a nice track that can really shine with a bit more polish.