Broadjam Artist: Lostfollicles
Song: Phone Geek
Reviewer: CWMullins
Positive Comments: Fun riff. get a sort of early 80s feel, on the rock side. Solo is really hot, and vocal has exactly right tone for this kind of song. was listening to the lyric, of course. Pick up, I’m calling you, etc. So for title I picked up the last line, which I heard as “if it’s the last thing you do.” Song is a good cross between rock and pop, I feel maybe a bit more rock….
Constructive Comments: I sort of expected a big chorus to pop up after the first verse, and then when the second verse went straight to solo, I realized there’s no chorus. So I would say structurally, the song is a bit simple. If not a chorus, at least a bridge section would add some variety. Some liens that explain more about “if it’s the last thing you do” would be good too. Cuz it sounds kind of ominous for such a fun song!