Broadjam Artist: Laurence WatkinsSong: Even IfReviewer: paul sandbergPositive Comments: original, interesting tonalities, cool, hip groove with appropriate lyrics. Very funky, retro fun with a quirky and effective vibe with a nice melody that’s infect…
Broadjam Artist: Laurence Watkins
Song: Even If
Reviewer: paul sandberg
Positive Comments: original, interesting tonalities, cool, hip groove with appropriate lyrics. Very funky, retro fun with a quirky and effective vibe with a nice melody that’s infectious.Kind of cool that you used an afuchi for percussion (at least I think that is what it sounds like)
Constructive Comments: while I like the idea of the electric piano counter, I felt that it could have been more of a wash, with more reverb and saturation that would make it “there” but not standing out so far in the mix. Overall I felt like the entire production could use more “air”, although it works as is as a kind of “intimate” feel. I also felt that the end of the choruses seemed a bit swallowed vocally (“the end of time”).a little odd that the percussion drops off at 3:20 and the song goes on for another 10 seconds.overall this has a real fun feel that with a bit more EQ attention and production could really be a seller.