Broadjam Artist: Phil Bouldry
Song: Convertible Summer
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Interesting topic! Very creative presentation of a unique subject. I could almost feel the breeze tossing my hair! The intro sets up the song beautifully. The clarity of the vocals is praiseworthy and the excellent mix keeps them right up front. Nice drum and guitar work! Effective backup vocals. Production is very professional, with a great attention to detail. I like the way you went through from summer to winter in the story. Nice, well-thought out ending.
Constructive Comments: “but she and me” I question the grammatical correctness of that. Who ever says she and me? The do-do-do section (pop scat?) was interesting, don’t know if that helps the commercial appeal or not. When you sing “summer” I’d like to hear a more vertical/round than horizontal sound…Do you know what I am talking about when I say that?