Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Turn It Off, Then Turn Me On / Marg & Art Corey
Reviewer: B.Still
Positive Comments: The stand out in this tune is the sax. I really like the player’s chops. He does an excellent job. The song has good energy. The guitar work is good as are the drums. The hook is decent. I like the idea of the song…I’ve seen my son and his girlfriend sit next to each other and converse by cell phone. It’s irritating for sure.
Constructive Comments: I honestly do not like the song. I am sorry to say it. The vocal sounds very pitchy. The intro seems out of context with the rest of the song. It’s there for a second and then comes back in at the end I’d guess very little thought was put into that. Was the tune rushed? Do you already have a better version? The recording seems rather low in quality. The background vocals? Not sure what that is but it too falls out of pitch,,,guessing it a woman’s voice…all that said, if you clean it up and change the lyric a bit ( turn it off is not the way to start a tune for providers ), you might get licensed by a cell phone company