Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: I’ve Got My Telephone
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Now this is a FINE piece of writing! I absolutely LOVE it. Great subject matter and the writer stuck to the theme…each verse more clever than the last. Fantastic intro sets up for the rest of the composition. Love the instrumentals, especially the first one with the keys. Rhyming/lyrics are fresh and original with wry humor injected. There’s a ton of truth to this song as i-phones are the preferred appendage of many these days. Favorite rhyme: Google maps/apps. missing/kissing. Room/sonic boom. This is just all-around fantastic work. Clear vocals. Flawless production chops.
Constructive Comments: I’m no expert on “commercial” requirements, but some might say this song is too long. If you wanted to shorten it, I’d cut the second instrumental and do an outro after the final verse. I would definitely like to hear more of your stuff. By the way, I wrote a similar song on the subject called “Google It” by Kate Carpenter. Check it out if you have time. I hope it makes you smile. I also wrote another called Delete Delete Delete. Mrs. Kate
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