Before You Swallow by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: Before You SwallowReviewer: Phil BouldryPositive Comments: Nice lead guitar licks. Nice addition and mix of the female vocal.Constructive Comments: There are a couple places where it seems like too much lyric is bein…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Before You Swallow

Reviewer: Phil Bouldry

Positive Comments: Nice lead guitar licks. Nice addition and mix of the female vocal.

Constructive Comments: There are a couple places where it seems like too much lyric is being squeezed into the space. For example – instead of “sixteen cars and counting” maybe “seven cars and counting” would sound better to the ear and be smoother on the tongue to sing.