Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: Feel My Soul
Reviewer: Ashley Martin
Positive Comments: Excellent job on the melody and rhythms, this song is actually quite catchy. There are a lot of words to your lines and you did an amazing job with your phrasing and timing, everything fits and works! The versus/chorus/bridge are very well defined and keeps the ear engaged. Overall very well written and great performance on the vocals/guitar/drums. I really enjoyed this song.
Constructive Comments: You have a great melody/chord progression, but I think you could tighten it up on the vocals, making sure you have the same melodic pattern repeating in your lines. There are a few places where in one line your voice goes up and in the next line I’m expecting/wanting to hear the same pattern but then your voice will go down on a note. The ear really picks up on these small details and it’s what makes melody stand out. It’s a little detail, but would make the whole song just more defined and refined. Keep on writing! Best wishes.