Broadjam Artist: John Walradt
Song: Sunny Sunday
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Here’s a sweet, loving, childlike song that makes the listener smile and feel a good feeling. I really like the chord progression. It’s rather unique and adds an interesting element to the song. Background keys add a nice touch to this song and the guitar harmonics at the end are sure to please. Instrumental with “da da da” is cute and pleasant to listen to. Lyrics are sweet, simple and easy to understand. This appears to be a home recording, but it’s adequate for communicating the carefree atmosphere the songwriter strives to create.
Constructive Comments: I believe this song (and artist) have potential. Here’s what I would work on: The vocal is pitchy and needs to sound a bit more confident. The background work on the keys moves in and out. Once it’s in, keep it in…When you take it out, it’s like taking the sugar out of the cookie. The song might benefit from a consistent chorus and more finesse in the guitar playing. It might also shine more with the touch of a professional producer.