Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: I’ve Got My Telephone
Reviewer: Square One
Positive Comments: I like the message of the song, one I understand and agree with! The keyboard work is great, I really like the wurly around 2 mins in. The lyrical content is great and reminds me of a cross between Steve Miller and The Presidents of the United States of America. The mix is sealed with a nice bit of compression that glues it together.
Constructive Comments: To me the song although lyrically interesting, the music can be a bit generic at times. Especially the guitar comps, they sound very dry and almost like general midi. Though I can tell that you took all of these sounds and made a good mix with them, I think the core material, which to me sound a bit like out dated plugins, leave a bit to be desired. Tho I do think that if your source instrumentation were of a higher quality that your song could come to life! But this is just personal preference in the end and i dig the tune overall. good luck mate!