Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: Hold On Me
Reviewer: John Walradt
Positive Comments: Vocals are lovely! Convincing delivery of emotion. Also, there’s no doubt that you know your stuff in the studio. You know how to arrange instrumental parts in a song with not too little and not too much in the way orchestration.
Constructive Comments: The most important thing to remember is that I am not the last word, not even the middle. The song is pleasant but I would not release it as a single however, I would include it on an album. Lyrically, it’s trite: it doesn’t say you’re stringing me along in a new and different way. Although the melody doesn’t stand out as unique, it shows you’ve got what it takes because the melody and arrangement show variations that can be followed and remembered.