Broadjam Artist: SRJ
Song: Electrifide In Me
Reviewer: Square One
Positive Comments: Its a bit generic with a very flat mix, but there is lots of potential, i especially like when the bass briefly drops out, this adds movement and a bit of seperation. But the mix doesnt bring out any emotions, it just kind of pushes along, maybe less compression? And possibly a bit more variation in the song may help, but i do like the melody as the song moves forward, maybe just a remix is in order. Good luck!
Constructive Comments: As i said in the comments, it just needs to be mixed differently and possibly replace some of the more generic sounding midi instrumentation with some more comtemporary sounds, I do also like the more arabic melody type thing later on in, the chromatics add a bit a depth to the overall sound of things, and the break towards the end gives it space to bring it all back together.