Little Journey by Bill Dake

Broadjam Artist: Bill DakeSong: Little JourneyReviewer: Third WordPositive Comments: The melody is smooth, Steely DanishConstructive Comments: The lyric rambles, and the hook hard to distinguish. I suggest a re-write to establish a stronger hook and st…

Bill Dake

Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Little Journey

Reviewer: Third Word

Positive Comments: The melody is smooth, Steely Danish

Constructive Comments: The lyric rambles, and the hook hard to distinguish. I suggest a re-write to establish a stronger hook and storyline.