Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: I’ve Got My Telephone
Reviewer: Randall Mark
Positive Comments: This is a great song! Clever, witty lyrics with a light, bouncy feel to the rhythm. Lots of good stuff here and a lighthearted commentary on today’s youth that is buried in electronics and tech at the expense of real life interaction and experience. I also loved the various instrumentation used, good variety which kept it interesting. Nice instrumental bridges also. Love the song
Constructive Comments: I can’t offer anything. Song is great as is. I have to admit it reminds me a bit of Facebook Addict, the song I wrote. Mine is a guy specifically addicted to FB. Your song is more clever because it alludes to electronics in general. Also I like how the music in your song kept it lighthearted and fun. Sorry I guess the section was for offering constructive criticism but I just don’t have any!