Pop Song by HarryBudini

Broadjam Artist: HarryBudiniSong: Pop SongReviewer: Bill DakePositive Comments: Reminds me of early Nilsson.Constructive Comments: I had difficulty hearing all of the lyrics….might just be my old ears, but it made it difficult to really comment much…

HarryBudini

Broadjam Artist: HarryBudini
Song: Pop Song

Reviewer: Bill Dake

Positive Comments: Reminds me of early Nilsson.

Constructive Comments: I had difficulty hearing all of the lyrics….might just be my old ears, but it made it difficult to really comment much on them. Instrumentation is fun and reminiscent of some early Beatles or Harry Nilsson tunes. Probably not a big audience for this in the musical decline we’re in, but it might work in a movie or video.

Abba Father by Matthew Stemme

Broadjam Artist: Matthew StemmeSong: Abba FatherReviewer: Bill DakePositive Comments: Beautiful song, beautiful message. Constructive Comments: Really nice to hear a song of praise that isn’t over produced or sung.I could hear this done with a choir, t…

Matthew Stemme

Broadjam Artist: Matthew Stemme
Song: Abba Father

Reviewer: Bill Dake

Positive Comments: Beautiful song, beautiful message.

Constructive Comments: Really nice to hear a song of praise that isn’t over produced or sung.I could hear this done with a choir, too. Thanks for the opportunity to hear this…..Bill

honky tonkin’ tonight by C.J. Miller

Broadjam Artist: C.J. MillerSong: honky tonkin’ tonightReviewer: amy abernathyPositive Comments: This was a fun Traditional country song, perfect for a Honkey Tonk Country bar.Constructive Comments: I liked the song it was fun, but verse one on the las…

C.J. Miller

Broadjam Artist: C.J. Miller
Song: honky tonkin’ tonight

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: This was a fun Traditional country song, perfect for a Honkey Tonk Country bar.

Constructive Comments: I liked the song it was fun, but verse one on the last line gave up the chorus, so there was no surprise when you got to the chorus, it was already heard in your verse. So I would change that last line and let your chorus be unexpected and a little more fun. I think it will make the song much stronger. Its hard to pitch Traditional country, because today’s music is so pop country, I think it needs to be at it’s best to pitch. Just my thoughts, good song.

Colossians 2: 9-10 by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Colossians 2: 9-10Reviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I found the song much too short. I liked where it was going though. I just think more verses would have given the song a better rounded feel. But what was …

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Colossians 2: 9-10

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I found the song much too short. I liked where it was going though. I just think more verses would have given the song a better rounded feel. But what was there is great, vocals beautiful.

Constructive Comments: nothing to add

Erase Un Ayer (It Was Yesterday) by RICARDO ALONSO

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSOSong: Erase Un Ayer (It Was Yesterday)Reviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I liked the melody line for this song. It is very relaxing to listen to. You did a great job on the arrangement.Constructive Comments: nothin…

RICARDO ALONSO

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Erase Un Ayer (It Was Yesterday)

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I liked the melody line for this song. It is very relaxing to listen to. You did a great job on the arrangement.

Constructive Comments: nothing to add

People, Places, and Things – Live by Douglas Branson aka dB+1

Broadjam Artist: Douglas Branson aka dB+1Song: People, Places, and Things – LiveReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I really liked the drive to this song. Your vocal is really good. I thought the arrangement was done well. I couldn’t hear the tal…

Douglas Branson aka dB+1

Broadjam Artist: Douglas Branson aka dB+1
Song: People, Places, and Things – Live

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I really liked the drive to this song. Your vocal is really good. I thought the arrangement was done well. I couldn’t hear the talking part to well.

Constructive Comments: nothing to add

18. I Can Hear You Smiling (pop) by StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecordsSong: 18. I Can Hear You Smiling (pop)Reviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: A very tender song. I thought the vocals were really good. The arrangement is really good. The lyrics are great too. Could be on the radio…

StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: 18. I Can Hear You Smiling (pop)

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: A very tender song. I thought the vocals were really good. The arrangement is really good. The lyrics are great too. Could be on the radio.

Constructive Comments: nothing to add

Slipped Away/Vocal by Phoebe Blume by Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Felice Kaye-Cooper / SongwriterSong: Slipped Away/Vocal by Phoebe BlumeReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I can see this song working in a movie for older times like the 40’s. Vocals well suited to the song. Great piano arrangem…

Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter
Song: Slipped Away/Vocal by Phoebe Blume

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I can see this song working in a movie for older times like the 40’s. Vocals well suited to the song. Great piano arrangement.

Constructive Comments: nothing to add

I Ain’t No Van Gogh Coreys by Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art CoreySong: I Ain’t No Van Gogh CoreysReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I think this song would go well on radio. It’s really good. I liked the arrangement and vocals are well suited to the song.Constructive Comment…

Margie & Art Corey

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: I Ain’t No Van Gogh Coreys

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I think this song would go well on radio. It’s really good. I liked the arrangement and vocals are well suited to the song.

Constructive Comments: nothing to add