Hot Breath by Theopolous

Broadjam Artist: TheopolousSong: Hot BreathReviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: Not bad for a demo! Keep on!Constructive Comments: Vocals should be redone or pitch corrected. The drum programming needs to be made to build some tension and not sound…

Theopolous

Broadjam Artist: Theopolous
Song: Hot Breath

Reviewer: Sam Cooper

Positive Comments: Not bad for a demo! Keep on!

Constructive Comments: Vocals should be redone or pitch corrected. The drum programming needs to be made to build some tension and not sound so mechanical. The other instrumentation, while not incorrect, could be made less sterile.