Broadjam Artist: Tim Patterson
Song: With Your Love
Reviewer: Bob Bentley
Positive Comments: Good vocals and instrumentation. The production overall was fine and well recorded. The song is well constructed and performed.
Constructive Comments: I’m sorry to say I just couldn’t get my head around the lyrics. The rhymes were there OK but the catch up premise and the tough road etc. didn’t work for me. There are some clever parts such as getting high to get a better view but of what? If it was being sung to a person, what could they learn from it?Sorry, I wanted to rate this more highly but IMHO a rewrite would be worth considering.But what do I know, it could be a major hit! Good luck with it.