Month: January 2020

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: one step

Reviewer: Marilyn Hall

Positive Comments: Nice arrangement with good movement. It has a jazzy feel.

Constructive Comments: I waited for a lyric to start. This lends itself to be paired with a lyric.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: The Eyes Of The Lonely / Dream Pop

Reviewer: Marilyn Hall

Positive Comments: I like it. I think it may be representative of the genre (Dream Pop).

Constructive Comments: The lyric is strong compared to the music track.

Broadjam Artist: N.Jones, Protilius Productions
Song: Into the expanse (2016)

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Very well done textural piece!! Really creates tension!! Production sounds totally pro to me!Could see this as film score music for an intense, disturbing scene!! Excellent!!!

Constructive Comments: Works great as it is!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Husky Records LLC
Song: Tha Bishop – The Universal Code

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Very well done!! Great writing, and playing production which is totally pro!!

Constructive Comments: Great track! I would not change a thing. Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: dunkelmann

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Very cool instrumental!! Excellent playing and very catchy feel!! Love the guitar tones! Very well done!!

Constructive Comments: Love it the way it is!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: larry costa
Song: Dancing in the Snow

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Cute song!! I’m a big fan of Christmas, and Christmas songs! Very clever write, and musical style suits it well! Great job all around!

Constructive Comments: Arrangement/production could be a bit better. Well done!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Wonder Girl

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Fun song!! Clever writing and a catchy melody! Vocal has a good feeling to it…..authentic!Nice job all around!

Constructive Comments: Playing is good but could be better, as could production. Nice tune!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: Trenadawn
Song: I Didn’t Notice

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: Nice tune very emotional lyrics, very easy melody on the ears. Vocals are great and the instramention is great love the ending! Great job.

Constructive Comments: The song is really well done. I gave very good grades for this my only suggestion and it is just my opinion is it might have a stronger impact if it were slowed down to a ballad. Just a thought!

Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Coast City

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: Interesting tune. More Jazz than pop. Nice instramentation unique melody. Very unique descriptive lyrics which really told a story nicely done. Could see this in a film or even commercial. Vocals are very good. Nice job!

Constructive Comments: The hook is not commercial but it is a nice jazz tune so doesn’t need to be I can’t really critisize this lyrically it is strictly top notch. Great story telling.

Broadjam Artist: William Smith
Song: Teach Me How To Love You

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Great Killer Beat right out of the starting blocks!! It just sucks the listener in!! Has a bit of an 80’s vibe to it!! As a suggestion, you might use a tad more reverb on the lead vocal, just for some pan-ash…not much though!! Again, very tune, keep them coming!!! Look forward to hearing your next Composition!!

Constructive Comments: As a suggestion, you might use a tad more reverb on the lead vocal, just for some pan-ash…not much though!!