Month: January 2020

Broadjam Artist: Ladee V
Song: Take Me

Reviewer: Marilyn Hall

Positive Comments: I enjoyed the lyrics and the vocals on this song. Nice mood and arrangement. Enjoyable, – easy listening, easy on the ears.

Constructive Comments: Your strength is in the lyric writing and vocals.

Broadjam Artist: TOM HENRY
Song: The More You Play

Reviewer: Hartmut Oberdieck

Positive Comments: very nice song, very good vocals and instruments.

Constructive Comments: There is a little bit work to do on the recording. A little bit more live – feeling. Good luck!!

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Put Your Heart Back In The Freezer

Reviewer: Mike Lee Boehnlein (Bainline)

Positive Comments: I really like the originality of this song. Great idea. The recording of this song works for pitching. Good instrumental break and vocal is up front. The sound quality is good.

Constructive Comments: I would classify this song as a country song rather than a bluegrass song. Primarily because bluegrass instruments were not used. The melody is too familiar. I had the melody memorized after hearing it the first time around. You might think, well what’s wrong with that? In today’s country the melody needs to be one of surprises. Make sure what you are singing matches the lyric sheet. Work on painting a picture with your lyrics instead of telling. This is something I also struggle with. Show more and tell less. I hope this helps. It’s just my opinion. I am also a work in progress.

Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: Dance of the Autumn Leaf Fairy

Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey

Positive Comments: Gosh, this composition is absolutely exquisite. Wowza, this song should be in a Film! What else can one say, ever movement in the piece is quite breath taking, Great Job who ever!! Wish we had the ability to write music with such musical feeling….what a jewel!! Flat out incredible!! Not much more to say to get that fifth Star…..there we go Bingo!!!

Constructive Comments: Not a thing, this is gorgeous!!! Great Job!!