Month: January 2020

Broadjam Artist: HAWC
Song: Crazy Rmx

Reviewer: Trenadawn

Positive Comments: Beat was nice… the style of the song i liked reminded me of Montel Jordan & Mint Condition… I loves the harmony parts 🙂

Constructive Comments: My suggestion would be write 2 to 3 different type songs to the same beat to see what sounds better.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: All Because I Love You / R&B

Reviewer: Trenadawn

Positive Comments: I really enjoyed listening.. I was making up lyrics in my head :)Sounds great keep up the good work!!

Constructive Comments: As far as the arrangement i would have loved to hear a little piano.

Broadjam Artist: Greg Johnson
Song: When My Baby Sings

Reviewer: Hartmut Oberdieck

Positive Comments: Very nice song, lot of feelings, great vocals, very authentic.

Constructive Comments: nothing critical to say – good luck

Broadjam Artist: Ladee V
Song: Enjoy Life

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Loved the lyrics and the instrumentation is solid. The playful harmonies are super!

Constructive Comments: The clinking percussion that’s throughout the song is a bit too bright and distracting from the tune. I would have only used it in the bridge or removed it completely. Other than that this song is a winner!

Broadjam Artist: Mike Braun
Song: Life’s A Wondrous Thing

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Lovely lyrics. And very pretty instrumentation.

Constructive Comments: I would have capo’ d maybe one up as the lower register gets a bit lost. That would also brighten up the song a little. Other than that it’s really well done. Maybe a steel pedal guitar in the bridge and end would be cool and add a bit more dimension to the tune. But that’s just personal preference.

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Just An Accident

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Pretty lyrics and you have tiny similarity to bob Dylan. Liked the B3 organ subtlety in the background.

Constructive Comments: I would have liked to hear a little bit of harmonies in the chorus but that’s just my taste. Nicely done!

Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Short Story (Folk-Contemporary)

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Very pretty song and excellent heart felt lyrics! Excellent instrumentation.

Constructive Comments: Not much to improve on here, maybe a little touch up on your vocal tuning. But honestly a really pretty song.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Was It Written That Way

Reviewer: Mitch Siegal

Positive Comments: Powerful cohesive lyrics. Nicely done. Very smooth instrumentation and blended well with your vocals.

Constructive Comments: None really other than a pre chorus and stronger bridge may have given it a bit more dimension but that’s just personal preference. Beautiful song.

Broadjam Artist: Penny Towers
Song: I Dive Into The Ocean

Reviewer: John Hazlett

Positive Comments: This song really draws you in. It would make a great intro in a movie or program about an adventure at the ocean.

Constructive Comments: Well, I really liked this, but it isn’t New Age.

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: Tap City

Reviewer: Randall Mark

Positive Comments: Nice mix of instrumentation. I’d love to hear it live with the full bandI like the bridge and keyboardsReminds me of Joe Cocker, aggressive!

Constructive Comments: Can’t tjink of any suggestions. It’s a strong song