Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Wonder Girl
Reviewer: Systole
Positive Comments: I thought this was a very charming little song. Excellent melodies, instrumentation, and the lyrics seemed solid. It’s just the right length, and I could easily see this becoming a hit if it hit the right place at the right time.
Constructive Comments: The vocals are a little disappointing. This isn’t necessarily a problem it does add to the song’s character. But I do think that some more work on the vocals is in order. They just need to be more consistent, and maybe with an added effect or something I’m not really sure. I don’t recall there being any kinds of solos…perhaps I zoned out thinking about the other elements. But there is a lot of room here for a cool piano or guitar solo. The groundwork is there with the melodies.