Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Loco Beat-EDM
Reviewer: Systole
Positive Comments: A decent melody, good beat. There’s a fair amount of variation as well, so that helps. The recording itself is very solid. Mixed well.
Constructive Comments: I would say that while there is some variation on the melody, the song seems anticlimactic to me. It’s trying to go somewhere but mostly ends up just treading water IMO. That’s not to say it’s terrible or anything. There are some quality elements, and perhaps it just isn’t to my personal taste, but it seems a bit par for the course for this genre. Good, but lacking that extra something that takes it to the next level. Might be worth taking this one back to the drawing board, not abandoning the melody or beat but really trying to make it more unique or energized.