Broadjam Artist: Denis Kavemeier
Song: Cosmic Intentions
Reviewer: Mamma Freedom
Positive Comments: Hey Denis Nice to hear from you.I really the way the hook captures you straight away, the original hook which sounds like its on some from Tepura 1.10 is an excellent instrumentation switch but keeping the vibe.The eastern vibe carries the song superbly so when the big rock guitar .Its really well played and excellently delivered in mix and production.I own the Grand Northern Recording Studio so if you ever need any mixing, session players production or mastering give me a shout.alex@cmimusicgroup.comMuch LoveAlexCMI Music Group / Grand Northern Recording Studio
Constructive Comments: Maybe have look at the arrangement and maybe shorten some parts by a few bars just create a little bit of uncertainty with the listen. Don’t put 10 lots 4 bars in there cause after a while the listener because aware of the pattern and subconsciously they drift off and get bored which is the key point to an instrumental when there are no vocals to anchor the track down.Maybe have the break at 4mins filter somehow to change the sonics of the part some people know its the end in a emotional way too.