Broadjam Artist: Greg Johnson
Song: Heaven Only Knows
Reviewer: Randall Mark
Positive Comments: I loved the bridge at the second half of the song where I just had the violin in the piano into playing with each other it was very nice and the rest of the song after that which is the keyboards in the singing was very beautiful
Constructive Comments: I think the lyrics and rhymes could be sharpened to make the song even more effective. The lyric of getting on the bus is a bit vague for me. Also maybe some rhymes with multi syllable words instead of one syllable rhymes like “bus” and “us” and “deep” and “keep”. Maybe some near rhymes would be also interesting to incorporate.