Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Crystal Ball
Reviewer: Mike Braun
Positive Comments: I really liked the lyrics. The rhythm was tight and chord structure sound. I didn’t expect, but loved the chord change going into the bridge. Overall it has a lot of potential with a little revision.
Constructive Comments: The intro strumming seemed a bit too long. About half way in I started to wonder if I would recognize the hook, but then it showed up. Maybe you could work “No Escape Today” if that is the title in a bit sooner. On the end of some of the vocal lines, it seemed like the chord should have resolved to fit the melody note a little better.