Broadjam Artist: Greg Johnson
Song: Winter Leaves
Reviewer: MCarollShaw
Positive Comments: Good smooth jazz feel to the song. The instrumentation as well as the arrangement leaves nothing to be desired.
Constructive Comments: Lots of words in the lyrics. Recommendation- simplify and make it specific. For example, “Who knows the reason our love changed like the seasons/ Caught in a rainstorm with no coat.” (Do you feel the greater impact?) Excess words reduce the impact. Generalities such as “love can change like the seasons” risks loosing the listener’s attention.