Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: Footsteps in the Hallway, A SWG-Starburst Song
Reviewer: Ogorod
Positive Comments: This is quite an epic work with a lot of ideas inside the song
Constructive Comments: It’s not a trip-hop, I think it’s electro pop. This song has a little too much of everything. The structure is fine, but there are too many sounds and lines in an arrangement. Consider making it much easier. Think which excat instruments give the feel that you seek for your song and mute the other part. Work on a rhythm more and consider making another vocal line for verses, it’s a bit too much words and the rhyme is very repetative, which may make one bored. The song is quite depressive also. Consider save all the topics, but try to say it some with some other words