Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: He is alive
Reviewer: Always Music
Positive Comments: Speaking the intro was a good touch actually. Sometimes that’s a refreshing bit to have at the beginning, something different. I think you’re playing and singing this? If you are that’s an impressive feat. The singing wasn’t bad and matched in pitch for the most part. The hook wasn’t too bad and the key wasn’t a bad choice either.
Constructive Comments: While the singing wasn’t bad and nor was the key choice, I think maybe playing it in a lower key would be better. Try moving down a minor third and singing it there. You might feel more comfortable, changing keys or trying them out is never a bad idea for vocalists. If you do it right, the only person whose going to notice it’s lower is you. 🙂 For the intro, I think you should try playing a bit of the first verse instrumentally to warm into the song. Maybe having a small section for the piano to shine as well. Good job! Keep writing and keep working toward your goals!