Broadjam Artist: Kevin Desire/Cholinga Praise
Song: Different on the Outside, One Family- demo
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Here’s a short little song that teaches kids to appreciate one another’s differences, an important subject to be sure. The lyrics are fresh, cute and child-friendly. The instrumentation is also charged with a fresh energy that I really like. Ending is nicely done! Keep up the good work!
Constructive Comments: I really think the mix needs work. The vocal is lost in the mix until the very end. I really had to strain to pick it up. Also the song is super short. Why not add a verse or 2? You’ve got a good thing going. Develop it fully. That being said, I have written several short children’s songs that are meant to be just that. So take it with a grain of salt. Definitely want to hear more of your work! Mrs. Kate